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I reach out for you
All night long
But you're not here,
Nowhere near...
And that's okay--
Cause I know
You love me,
Even though you're away.
You want to be here,
As much as I want you...
But baby,
Don't tell me you can't--
Hear me whisper
Your name in the night?
You can't feel me
Reaching out to you
All day?
Can't you...
Feel my arms holding
You tight?
Baby we might not
Be together, but
We're still together
And as much as
I love you...
That's how much I
Miss you...
All night long
But you're not here,
Nowhere near...
And that's okay--
Cause I know
You love me,
Even though you're away.
You want to be here,
As much as I want you...
But baby,
Don't tell me you can't--
Hear me whisper
Your name in the night?
You can't feel me
Reaching out to you
All day?
Can't you...
Feel my arms holding
You tight?
Baby we might not
Be together, but
We're still together
And as much as
I love you...
That's how much I
Miss you...
Okay so I wrote this a while back, and when I went to post this online...Yea my internet had been disconnected and then I spent a week at a cousin's house. I could have posted it there, they wouldn't have had a problem with it or anything...Just...I didn't have my journal with me.
So yea, it's up. It's not one of my better ones, but it's up.
It's probably going to end up getting a complete and utter rewrite at some point.
<3 you John.
So yea, it's up. It's not one of my better ones, but it's up.
It's probably going to end up getting a complete and utter rewrite at some point.
<3 you John.
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I know you're looking for advanced critique, but...
SHOOOOOOOOOO KEEEEEEEEEEEEWT!!!! AAAAAAAAAWE!!!
*random squeals* <3 <3 <3 <3
*gushes* <3 <3 <3
._.;; That's...all I really have to say...>_>; I'm sorry. ;
SHOOOOOOOOOO KEEEEEEEEEEEEWT!!!! AAAAAAAAAWE!!!
*random squeals* <3 <3 <3 <3
*gushes* <3 <3 <3
._.;; That's...all I really have to say...>_>; I'm sorry. ;